I thought this game was excellent and with a good story; a missing person, rude and obnoxious customers and dare I say, questionable meat! I really enjoyed it! Here is my video of it, please take a look :)
Thanks to all these fast food horror games Im now terrified to work at any restaurant😂 This game was good . A little confusing to figure out what to do but overall its a pretty solid horror game! Your game is second and starts at 01:35
The gameplay was very solid and I love the way you craft the orders.
The audio was really nice and very spooky at times.
The bad -
The lag was extremely bad in this particular game. This could be my PC, however, I feel like a settings menu or something would be beneficial.
Some parts of the game were not executed the way you probably intended. The two main ones are the pop up ghost and the dead body. They didn't scare me as much as it should have because the details are unnoticeable unless you were in a specific spot when those things happened. For the pop up ghost, I would say make it so that the player opens the door, and then the ghost pops up, and make sure the player is right in front of the door and not to the side of the door. As for the dead body, I would say as soon as you walk into the room, make the player unable to move, and then pan the camera to the body. As soon as you reveal the dead body, you can move again and the camera is in it's original position. Or else players who don't see the body right away (like myself) won't understand why the scary music is playing.
The instructions are very unclear. Make sure to tell the player how to do things. Don't just say, "Clean up debris and get this place back together." Instead, say something like "Pick up the trash on the restaurant floor and near the dumpster to put in the trash can" or something like that.
I also made a video with this game in it. The gameplay footage of your game starts at 21 minutes and 34 seconds.
Overall a fantastic little game with small jumpscares that made the game worth playing. I really adore the usage of those cardboard ghost jump scare, which is very reminiscent of Spooky's Jump Scare Mansion.
I enjoyed playing this even though it was short! I like the concept of doing jobs late at night while building up the terror factor the more you play. One bug I'd like to report is that grabable items tend to clip into other things, like when I lost my first patty to the insides of the grill.
A really cute, short, eerie horror game about working late night at a drive through.Had some silliness to it but still got me with some scares. I really enjoyed playing this one! Great job Shoft!
In the whole 'working at a convenience store late at night' genre, this had a lot of potential - the mechanic of serving burgers/taking orders was great. Especially the impatient customers! However, I found the story to be lacking - especially as our colleague was supposed to be missing? Ending was a little abrupt, but I enjoyed the concept and mechanics at play.
Pros:
Short and to the point, this is another fine addition to the 'late night working' genre
Great atmosphere, makes you feel isolated and alone in the workplace
Would work great as a prologue - perhaps if there was a sequel we could pick up after this colleague went missing?
Cons:
Objects could be defined more - had trouble opening the door to begin with, items not highlighted to see if they could be interacted with apart from radio, window etc
More coherent storyline would have had a greater impact on the gameplay - why was no-one giving the new person information/instruction? If you had just started a job wouldn't you find it a little strange with no-one in the workplace? Or no messages by colleagues, etc.
I would like to express my sincere gratitude for the extensive feedback you have provided. Your participation and feedback make a huge difference to me.
I feel a deep appreciation for your time and effort in trying my game. Your feedback was not only helpful, but also inspiring to me.
This game is a small demo. Now I am already working on the main game and the story. Soon I will create a dev blog where I will post news about the progress of development.
No problem at all - I always want to give detailed feedback to developers, constructive criticism as well as praise! I can really see this turning into something with a lot more 'bite' to excuse the pun, and hope to see more of your work in the future!
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I thought this game was excellent and with a good story; a missing person, rude and obnoxious customers and dare I say, questionable meat! I really enjoyed it! Here is my video of it, please take a look :)
I was entertained. Thank you very much!
The ghost trick was cute but surprising :)
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loved this shit it really gave me the heeby jeebys
Thanks to all these fast food horror games Im now terrified to work at any restaurant😂 This game was good . A little confusing to figure out what to do but overall its a pretty solid horror game! Your game is second and starts at 01:35
i just want an inf drive thru sim addition. I just wanna have to manage the restaurant as orders come in and actually restock without dying lol
I'm becoming Burgers now...
I give this game a 5/10.
The good -
The gameplay was very solid and I love the way you craft the orders.
The audio was really nice and very spooky at times.
The bad -
The lag was extremely bad in this particular game. This could be my PC, however, I feel like a settings menu or something would be beneficial.
Some parts of the game were not executed the way you probably intended. The two main ones are the pop up ghost and the dead body. They didn't scare me as much as it should have because the details are unnoticeable unless you were in a specific spot when those things happened. For the pop up ghost, I would say make it so that the player opens the door, and then the ghost pops up, and make sure the player is right in front of the door and not to the side of the door. As for the dead body, I would say as soon as you walk into the room, make the player unable to move, and then pan the camera to the body. As soon as you reveal the dead body, you can move again and the camera is in it's original position. Or else players who don't see the body right away (like myself) won't understand why the scary music is playing.
The instructions are very unclear. Make sure to tell the player how to do things. Don't just say, "Clean up debris and get this place back together." Instead, say something like "Pick up the trash on the restaurant floor and near the dumpster to put in the trash can" or something like that.
I also made a video with this game in it. The gameplay footage of your game starts at 21 minutes and 34 seconds.
I do a "two short games" thing on my channel, and I really enjoyed
this, I fell in love with the song on the radio, I do wish there was more of this game!
I feel you. The radio song does go hard.
That ghost jumpscare got me...it got me good lol! Great game!
Overall a fantastic little game with small jumpscares that made the game worth playing. I really adore the usage of those cardboard ghost jump scare, which is very reminiscent of Spooky's Jump Scare Mansion.
I had fun playing this game. That jumpscare really got me, I won't even lie. Great job.
Here's my gameplay of it:
CLASSIC HORROR GAME GOT 2/3 ENDING
GREAT GAME HOPE YOU ENJOY ALSO!
Anyone know what the song that plays on the boombox is? It's really nice :D
Came here from a Markiplier video, game looks cool, but its really short. Wanted to find that song at least tho!
It's Kisnou - Vesper
:)
Thanks! Came here with the same question!
Thank you!
Short but cool. Could use a little more time, have some more paranormal events. But overall, a pretty good experience. Kudos for the good work.
Short but still managed to get me pretty good.
Very good, short and sweet game, loved it! Great job!
That was a really cool game! I did not expected the twist at the end, that one got me. And the jumpscare was mean xD great game!
I have no idea how i got through my teens/early 20s without dying at an overnight job lmao
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I love games like this it gives me a happy humble burger farm vibe.
I enjoyed playing this even though it was short! I like the concept of doing jobs late at night while building up the terror factor the more you play. One bug I'd like to report is that grabable items tend to clip into other things, like when I lost my first patty to the insides of the grill.
The real horror was the demanding customers!
I really enjoyed playing this one!
Great job Shoft!
I 100% had no idea what i was doing half this game, but somehow still enjoyed myself!
that ghost has my whole heart <3
Interesting game here for sure and I see you took a page out of Spooky's Jumpscare manor as well. Nice job.
Here's my channel for other games I have played. https://www.youtube.com/@Levont
This was a fun little experience! I was expecting way more jump scares after the first one the ending was great!
Good Game ngl! Check the vid out :)
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I would like to express my sincere gratitude for the extensive feedback you have provided. Your participation and feedback make a huge difference to me.
I feel a deep appreciation for your time and effort in trying my game. Your feedback was not only helpful, but also inspiring to me.
This game is a small demo. Now I am already working on the main game and the story. Soon I will create a dev blog where I will post news about the progress of development.
Thanks again for the feedback :)
No problem at all - I always want to give detailed feedback to developers, constructive criticism as well as praise! I can really see this turning into something with a lot more 'bite' to excuse the pun, and hope to see more of your work in the future!
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had a HUGE JUMPSCARE LOVED IT! Wish there was more but amazing !